Unit 1 - Task 3 Paraphrasing

 According to Gilbert Amelio, former President and CEO of National Semiconductor Corp, necessary qualities of a leader is to have efficient and concise communication skill. Leaders should have an excellent time management, keeps tabs on project progression and convey the importance and deadlines of the task at hand. They should also be able to convey positive energy to get the team to be active and be more initiative. Failure to do so means the role of leader practically becomes a position for namesake.

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  1. mochinomics13 January 2022 at 03:10

    Hi Seong Ung, the paraphrased quote is well structured with good flow. However, there are some grammar errors here and there that can be improved on. The reference and citation can be added as well.

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    1. SeongUng8 April 2022 at 12:04

      Dear XinYi,

      Thank you for your comments and reading my post. I could also see some of my mistakes that you pointed out. I hope to have more discussions in our class.

      Best regards,
      SeongUng

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